Wednesday, November 7, 2007

From Easter 1916, William Butler Yeats, Group 4 Poetry

From Easter 1916 by William Butler Yeats

A shadow of cloud on the strear
change minute by minute,
A horse hoof slides on the brain
And a horse plush within it
The long legged moor hens dive

My Poem
A horse is a shadow on the moor
The hens are change by minute
Slides plush within it the long legged
A horse brain on the moor in the dive
Along side the moor the hens cluck
in the rainy moor glen

The clouds open up to the minute and
minute by the trembling sky

1 comment:

Amanda Valley said...

You did a good job of changing meaning here and making it your own, I like it.